Thread:AlphaShenron/@comment-1038387-20120527205704

Hi. Thanks for those character bios. Unfortunately, none of it meets our current Manual of Style. In short:


 * it has to be written in-universe, so no "she is seen doing so and so"
 * from the perspective of the person in question.
 * in proper English
 * and sourced.

Let me know if you have any questions. 