Thread:Ratrangerm/@comment-1038387-20130222093208

Some more notes on your summaries—I don't check them as often as I should, but a couple of notes:
 * In my personal opinion, starting the section with who's present is a bit superfluous. I think it would benefit the flow of the section if, on the first, occasion, you just called the group "others", "Alpha Squad", those kind of things. Individual members can be introduced in the narrative later on, when they actually do something. The character bio is a summary of the episode synopsis, so not the same level of detail is needed.
 * The dash: we use —, not --. Also, no spaces are needed—so it's like this -- not like this.
 * This is also a small thing: Doctor Fate's doesn't have a doctorate (that we know of), so it feels a bit wrong to appreviate his title in the summaries. "Doctor Fate" will do, as opposed to Dr. Wilcox, Dr. Palmer, Dr. Cross, et cetera.

Just my cents. I don't demand you follow them to the letter, but please consider some of it. 