User blog comment:Thailog/Ep. 120 "Coldhearted" discussion/@comment-47881-20120310205901/@comment-3465526-20120311025729

I thought this was a really nice character piece with good flow and strong development -- a quality plot structure seasoned with some decent general action clips to help the transitions. A small general progression of the overall arc building tension... As a second opinion, my wife (professional writer/editor) after watching this episode commented that these stories were so well constructed she should do breakdowns and analyses to help her own story work.

Thialog, is it possible you just don't like Wally?