Thread:Warmachine375/@comment-1038387-20121106112927/@comment-34954086-20121202104711

This was your rendition of his personality:

"Black Adam appears to be a strong silent type, always carried out orders without question. "


 * Tone, "appears" implies that it's basically speculative, or at the least, non-conclusive, which it is. Content isn't for questionable material. "Type" also fits similarly. Describe, don't relate.
 * A personality section is for characters who have displayed a personality. Black Adam, hasn't.
 * "Always" implies multiple occasions. We've seen him once, how can you be so sure about such a broad statement?.
 * Length.

ie. There's more content for what I can find wrong with your edit, then the edit itself.