Thread:Tupka217/@comment-7292165-20170226172016/@comment-1038387-20170226200340

You most definitely added more long sentences. Being an English major doesn't magically make those sentences less long.

I'm not hostile towards change. I'm okay with many of these things (if not all) being rewritten.

I'm notorious for my long sentences. But I had to change my style writing for this wiki, because we cater to the reader - and we really shouldn't use more than two clauses per sentence.