Thread:FossilLord/@comment-1038387-20130303160028

The entire structure of the article was faulty. It was written from the perspective of Earth, but it should be written as a continuous story from Warworld's perspective. Also, character bios go in past tense, characters and items with an own page should be linked on their first appearance, Squads should not be abbreviated with just their letter, and the dash is —, not -. Among other things.

Hope that helps. 