Thread:Tupka217/@comment-24945873-20190522045551/@comment-1038387-20190522050243


 * 1) No sources throughout
 * 2) Wrong tense
 * 3) Out of universe
 * 4) You somehow managed to miss the first part of "Triptych".
 * 5) Who is "Haze"?
 * 6) It's all play-by-play; it should be a summary.